Friday, December 10, 2010

If a 7th grader was in charge of the world

What if you woke up one day and you were in charge of the world with your 5 best friends?I woke up on a Friday and I was in the white house with my 5 best friends and my family. When I got out of bed I went into the kitchen and I saw the best chef in America her name was Chef Gaga. I asked her why I was here and she said oh leader you are so funny. Then I went into the eating area after I had a wonderful breakfast that was eggs bacon and a strawberry smoothie. I saw all of my best friends and then I asked why they were there they said I was being mean to thing I could lead the country by myself. I then asked what they were talking and they said that we were in charge of the world. My friends then said that we should get to work. So we went to our desk which I still wasn’t sure if it was mine yet but anyway I went to my desk and my friends and we made a bunch of laws that I thought were not necessary. Then after a long day of work I went to bed early. I then woke up the next day and found that it was a dream. I was so glad because I don’t like making laws for the country. That was a very hard dream.

4 comments:

  1. You did a great job writing this story. It really made me feel like I was there with you and your 5 friends. Bravo Annie Bravo!!!

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  2. Annie this was a great story, but you could have listed a little more detail, but not too much because then it would just be a confusing story.

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  3. You did I really good job on this story. I liked how you explained everything!

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  4. you did a good job with your story starter.

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