Author’s note: We had made a chain story in class that almost everyone in class would add something to your story started until you had a story. But when I got mine back I had an assassin in my story and it really did not make sense. So I decided to redo my story and keep my story started.
It was a sunny beautiful day. When it happened…. A tornado appeared out of nowhere. The tornado blindsided my house and swept me off the ground. I was so terrified when I was twirling around in the tornado I was hit more than five times with cars, wood and trees. So I was knocked out when I finally woke up. I had tons or burses and I thought I had some broken bones. When I finally got a hold of myself I look around and saw I was not in my home town anymore I was miles and miles away from my home. Got up off the ground and tried to walk but I just fell down. I tried many times but I just couldn’t. So I then remembered that I had my cell phone but when I checked my pockets it was not there. That meant that my phone was gone and it was lost in the tornado. I thought about how mad my parents would be at me. But then I thought they should not be so mad because it was not really my fault because I was in a tornado and the tornado made my phone come out of my pocket. They should be happy that I am still alive. After thinking of what trouble I might get into when I got home I figure out that I really should get home soon. So I tried to get up again and I could. So I went to see if anyone was a round to help me and I saw lots of people lots of them were nice and other not so much. This was a small town and I really liked it so I decided maybe I should call my family and ask if they would like to come to this town and live here. I first had to get a hold of them but when I look around I noticed that this place look familiar so I walked a little bit around and I saw a house that looked like my house but larger. I knocked on the door and my mom asked the door. She asked me where I had been and I said I was on a tornado. She said oh I saw that tornado go by. She was not one bit worried about me. I guess I went in the tornado and came all the way back home. I was so relieved. That I was back home and not some other place in the world. When I got into my house nothing was messed up and the neighbor had nothing wrong with it. Then I ran in to a wall and a heard a beeping sound it was my alarm to wake up. I guess it was just a dream.
I really like this story! Its very interesting and I love how it was all a dream(:
ReplyDeleteI liked this Annie!!
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